After The Tears

After The Tears

A Poem by Whiskurz

Wilted flowers standing side by side
Candles with melted wax
One shadow cast where ever you go
Now just one set of tracks

A whisper can no longer be heard
No promises to be paid
Closets get larger with plenty of room
A bed is easier made

One straw stands alone in a glass
There's always an empty seat
There's more room now at the table
With plenty of food to eat

Yesterday seems like so long ago
Tomorrow? there isn't no hurry
The phone doesn't ring, you could care less
You don't have a reason to worry

This is the way a relationship dies
It's been this way for years
Life goes back to the way it was
Sometime after the tears

© 2013 Whiskurz


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This is really good. The flow and rhyme was well-done. :) Keep it up! :D 100/100
-Invisible Girl.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Whiskurz

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend....Whisk
The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

You're welcome! :)
Unfortunately this is very common in relationships. Dying down and becoming just another unexciting part of your day / life. Though it doesn't always have to be that way, and it isn't always that way. I remember I've seen middle aged couples and "old" couples still walking together and holding hands, hugging eachother and smiling. It may get start to get boring, but as long as you keep trying it is almost always bound to have positive consequences. Nice, honest write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Whiskurz

11 Years Ago

Thanks again my friend....Whisk

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Added on January 26, 2013
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