The Other Stuff

I wanted to buy a dozen red roses
But they refused to touch your hand
The chocolates said that, "You're much sweeter"
And, "Your lips would make them bland"

So I tried to find just the right card
But the words just ran away
There was nothing that the cards could do
There was nothing the words could say

I wanted to cook a Valentine's feast
But I fear it's just a waste
Your smile has crippled my need for food
My appetite's been erased

Then I tried to buy a diamond ring
But your beauty stole its shine
For it's never seen a love like ours
One like yours and mine

So I just want to say, "I love you"
And forget the other stuff
So Happy Valentines Day sweet darling
And I hope that that's enough

Reviews

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very well expressed

[Whiskurz]

Thank you kaykay........Whisk

[Poppie Mira]

well written, she is really a lucky girl!!!

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend......Whisk

[Michael G.]

Every guy with half a brain and who is lucky enough to have a girl, or a wife, should memorize these words... if he's smart.
Well written, my friend.

[Whiskurz]

Thank you Michael.......Whisk

[Serenity Faith]

That's beyond awesome! Just a whole heaping of awwwwwwwwwww! You're wife is quite lucky to have such a romantic husband. ^_~

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend......Whisk

[Yellow Butterfly]

This is so endearing and filled with romance and all the gushy stuff that Valentines brings.... I am sure this is definately enough for your true love...

Loved it.... :O)

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend......Whisk