Hopes and Fears

Hopes and Fears

A Poem by LauraKate
"

The simple truth

"

Being consumed -

totally and utterly devoured 

by a man;

by my love for him

and his for me,

is both my greatest fear

and my deepest desire.

© 2019 LauraKate


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May I ask if you've considered the man's point of view? Your poem is short and sweet. I liked it!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LauraKate

7 Months Ago

I have considered many a man's paint of view .... but they all have very different intentions. In th.. read more
Wow what a juxtaposition description of the dilemma of love by someone uncertain but seeking a solid bedrock. An interesting flowing free verse poem.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LauraKate

7 Months Ago

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, John, I am really glad that you find this interesting. Best wis.. read more
Totally being devoured by a man, that is scary. Mutual adoration is wonderful if it lasts. I don't like that feeling if being out of control, maybe I'm a bit of a control freak on the quiet. Your little poem Laura Kate made me look inwards.

Chris

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

You have raised some interesting thoughts there. I am now asking myself why I wouldn't be able to co.. read more
LauraKate

7 Months Ago

Life is full of lessons, no matter how devastating. It is up to us to discover which lessons we are .. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

I like where your words took me. Sometimes we need to look inside ourselves :)
giving oneself totally....it is scary....not the first time...then it is reckless abandon...but if that first time does not work out....we never quite approach love with the same freedom of heart.
j.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LauraKate

7 Months Ago

It is so scary Jacob. Too many things tell you not to try... until you find the right one, I'm hopin.. read more

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Added on August 23, 2019
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Tags: poem, poetry, prose, life, everyday, philosophy, lifestyle, thinking, identity, woman, womanhood, fertility, sexuality

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LauraKate
LauraKate

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