A colours choir sang vibrantly

A colours choir sang vibrantly

A Poem by Gee
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Spring

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Heads bowed as if in quiet prayer
the daffodils they swayed,
whilst dappled light through dancing trees
upon the lush grass played.

A bluebell sea rolled silently
to fallow fields yet sown,
o'er which in coming warmer months
a yellow quilt be thrown.

The thin veiled mists of early morn'
that washed the world with white,
cede to the over eager sun
days ever warm and bright.

A colours choir sang vibrantly
from life that bloomed anew,
to celebrate the birth of Spring
now another winter through.


© 2022 Gee


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Hi Gordon,
Are you back from your biking adventure? Was a lot of money earned for the charity?
This poem feels different then any I have read of yours in the past. Not sure exactly why..Perhaps the rhyme sequence?
Whatever it is I really enjoyed your poem..
Perfect as summer came all of a sudden and used the rain away...Our garden is thrilled!!
Lisa, early Monday morning

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Hi Lisa, got back to the UK yesterday evening, I am knackered.
As a group thus far we have ra.. read more
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

What did you think of my comments regarding your poem?
Lisa
Gee

1 Year Ago

Morning Lisa.
Regarding your comment, I guess this one has more of a sing song feel to it and.. read more
Finally it's summer and you paint an imaginative picture of what it looks like. Slowly, fallow grows to an array of colors..."A yellow quilt" what a great metaphor! These mature flowers sway in the breeze.... dance their way to fall. beautiful write Gee...
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Hi Betty, thank you. Glad you enjoyed the read.
Hope you are well
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome Gee, hope you are well too!
Best, B
This made me wanna jump in a field of dandelions :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you :)
Really beautiful and lifting the spirits up dear Gee, your expressions touch my heart with sheer tenderness and beauty. delightful to the hearts and minds. a Song of spring~

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Apologies for the late thank you.
Hope you are well m'dear
lightsong

1 Year Ago

No worries at all :>

All is well, I hope it's the same there :>
How I look forward to a warmer Spring with daffodils abloom and the sun making a difference to all the colour around us. Your poem covers it well.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Gee

3 Years Ago

Thank you Augustus
A lovely observation, Gee, of the springtime spectrum that encompasses a wonderfull, though fleeting time of year. Even though we have had such a horrendous winter, colour is already appearing in gardens and hedgerows, that shows the resilience of nature.

Norman

Posted 4 Years Ago


Gee

4 Years Ago

Hi Norman, hope you are well on the way back to full fitness.
Thank you for finding this and .. read more
Wow i especially loved last stanza or verse thanks for this beauty into my poetry competition good luck

Posted 4 Years Ago


Gee

4 Years Ago

Thank you Julie
No human choir could sing it better!! G, a wonderful poem of spring and all its glory!

As an aside I heard Milton Keynes mentioned on a Brit show the other night in reference to a prison. Told the wife . . . there's a fella on the WC site who lives there. Small world.
Tom

Posted 4 Years Ago


Gee

4 Years Ago

Cheers Tom.
Small world indeed. I once say by a pool on holiday in Tenerife and got chatting .. read more
This is just beautiful my friend and it flows just like spring sunshine ... light and lovely.
"A bluebell sea rolled silently
to fallow fields yet sown,
o'er which in coming warmer months
a yellow quilt be thrown."

Such lovely images ... well done you... best poem i have read in a while :)


Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

High praise Stella, thank you. Thought I'd throw this one out again as the sun has made a long overd.. read more
Beautiful poem Gee. Uplifting and makes me long for spring. Not long to go now. Still trying to keep warm. Not quite as cold today. Have a great week-end.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Thanks Christine. Yep a wee bit warmer, 5 weeks then off to Tenerife for a week, can't wait.
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Added on July 27, 2016
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