Gone now...

Gone now...

A Poem by Gee
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Simple words on summers arrival

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Gone now at last springs sobbing sky
and the misty shrouds of morn',
gone now drear grey and barren days
and the silent waking dawn,
as summer rouses from her sleep
and paints the world anew,
serenaded by an avian choir
'neath a cloudless sky of blue.
Oh how this life a better place
with colour, warmth and song,
so Gaia please this season grant
license to linger on.






© 2024 Gee


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Simple words indeed .. balderdash sir you just made a most amazing poem out of summer .. more than worthy of the full marks accorded .. just broke a nail tryin to accord more but she's not havin any of it .. All Good Things to you n yours Gee .. N

Posted 1 Week Ago


Gee

1 Week Ago

Good morning, all good in MK. thanks.
Thanks for dropping in Neville, always appreciated :)
Neville

1 Week Ago


........ and likewise, always my pleasure :)
Summer does hold a charm about it. The green of the trees, the smell of newly cut grass, flowers and blossoms, butterflies, the warmth of the sun (when it's not too hot ) :)

Your words describe the birth of a new summer so well and in such a poetic style I reread it several times slow. Why pass up beautiful words like this.

Well done, Gee.


Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Gee

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Relic. Hope all.is well
Your words are beautifully laid and offered, Gee. You undoubtedly speak for trillion who find this time of year a season of magic: bright colour, sweet sounds - and new adventures into a world fresh with extra growth and residence. Here, after rather a lot of rain (to say the least!) there seem to be even more greens than ever., Early flowers have been and gone, now others are budding, ready and waiting for their turn on the stage! Life is so much happier with all the colours, sounds and warmth. Our season has been recorded forever in your lovely words:

' the silent waking dawn,
as summer rouses from her sleep
and paints the world anew,
serenaded by an avian choir
'neath a cloudless sky of blue.'

Inhaling, sighing. Thank you for adding to this morning's just fading a bright dawn.

Bestest to you and your darlings. Enjoy the week

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Gee

2 Weeks Ago

Good morning and thank you. Will.read you under the blazing Cyprus sun...Off today😎
emmajoygreen

2 Weeks Ago

Oh thanks for that, tis raining like crazy here and was sposed to be dry-ish and warm!!!
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Dear Gee
I think we all wish the summer to linger on...our moods are light and airy...sunlight, long days, stunning dusk... and the warmth we all feel makes us alive....too bad autumn comes and the days get shorter; but we must enjoy the leaves and their stunning colors of gold, red, orange as they slowly drift to the earth....
lovely words, and vivid images
Warmly, B

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Gee

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Betty
Betty Hermelee

3 Weeks Ago

You’re very welcome, happy Tuesday!
Warmly, B
A good prayer. We need more days like this. Most days aint worth getting up.
Nicely done Gee.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Gee

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Andra. What part of the UK are you in?
A prayer to Gaia that she might delight us with a glorious and long summer.
Yes, life is uplifting when we feel comfortable and beauty is everywhere after the cold drab days that are so depressing to the soul...
A lovely pleasing write Gee...

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Gee

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Stella
If only summer would linger on lol. I like it. It can get too hot at times, but it's a fun season. Any reason for the apostrophe to signify plural? Never seen that before, so kinda caught me like 🤨. It might be better further down with "world" more than "sky" lol. But otherwise a really great piece, buddy! Well done!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Gee

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you. Have trouble with English language:) as for to,too not a clue where to use each one apart.. read more
What a lovely feeling your words brought on!
Dear Gee, I envy your gentle, colorful summer as I grapple with mine here,
one that's searing, boiling and discoloring all in its path.
Enjoy it to the fullest!
May your summer last long!

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Gee

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Divya
Seasons changes, Life changes, Thought changes, nice poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Gee

1 Month Ago

Thank you, appreciate you dropping in

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Added on May 11, 2024
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