"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land"   IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land" IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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i am missing Ms. Frieda and decided to re-post this poem which we did together .. i am so angry how one very nasty person was able to drive her from the Cafe :(

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Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land

Tapped upon a mushroom cap's fancy,
      to see if the rabbit hole was rumor
curiouser and curiouser
     about the unimaginable avenue,

She opens my mind and
fear grips my colors
from the hinterland .....                   tremors
wink    
           and blink   
                              and nod

As I sat upon my newfangled gumption
   common sense took a recess,
 spoke in rhyme to the tune of absurd
     to my surprise, the scaramouch    
                 of a head talked back

my birthing in darkness
          musk and dank scent
knocks        my shroom
head explodes
            collide's scope intense

in his elegant persuasion,
made a date for half past daft
took me on a dip of a mystical carpet trip
 alas,  we've lived happily ever after
upon a prime floating island in a cloud

clouds of words
spilling like rough gouged stones in
tumbler's majestic insane
forever now i
 

re-pronounce her name



beginning and



end... ;)

                      

© 2016 Einstein Noodle


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What a superb collaboration from you and dear, dear Frieda = yours are minds that walk the same space.. perhaps!

There's so much in this piece, the colour and highlights take the reader into a world of bewilderingly spaced.out somewhere. The phrasing you've used is another language, a magic not to be translated - and who would want to do that...all of us!

Lewis Carrol would undoubtedly want to join the two of you in another collab, happily sharing his enlightenment via any means - even holding the breath and flying off and away with the daisies. . Brava and brava again.. Loved this. Great musical accompaniment, by the way... ..

Posted 7 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

Em, your comment touches my heart .. yes .. she was just a little wicked and so full of spunk and jo.. read more
emmajoygreen

2 Weeks Ago

Am meant to see this wonderful collaboration tonight. It is a much needed gift. Although we never me.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

love and big hug emmajoy ...



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mou
The catchy 'Mushroom Clouds' enticed me into this place and honestly, I never expect 'a few minutes read' at your page as the poems speak in 'layers'.
I am awestruck by the imagination, witty language, structure, punctuations, and the magical flow. I feel it needs a wonderful understanding to collab for artistic projects but this poem shows the magic beyond.
- mou

Posted 5 Days Ago


This is an abstract and rather thrilling advent somewhere else. One filled with fantasy and psychedelic floating into the imagination.

Love love love the imagination and story telling in this poem. Well done on writing with a fellow poet. It has been ages since I have written with someone else but they are always fun to do.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

thanks for taking time Beauty! glad you found something worthwhile in this one .. yes .. co working .. read more
Poetic Beauty

1 Week Ago

You are welcome!!!
WOW!! This one amazing write here, I really enjoyed this write.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

your a treat Ms. June Bug!! thank you for bringing me back to this one .. it is special to me .. i a.. read more
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A fantastical romp flowing with abundant imagination.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

thank you my new found friend! Frieda left an imprint here at the Cafe' ... we had fun writing this .. read more
Anita Frader

2 Months Ago

You're welcome 😊


Working backwards, as I am occasionally want to do .. i have just revisited two of my favouwrite collaborations ever .. and get this .. Have now just found my third, which just so happens to be my most favouwriest of them all .. How I managed to miss out on this one for the last 10 .. Yes TEN whole years is beyond me .. unless I have been dreaming the whole time .. Truly truly magical and priceless ink spilt so bloomin well by your good self Mr. E .. and that partner of yours whom I still think about a lot and miss such a lot .. p.s I just hit the rating rectangle so hard, I swear I saw x3 zero's for a moment .. Neville


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

your the best Neville ... i am sure our dear friend hears you .. i still think of and miss, her as w.. read more
Neville

2 Months Ago


My absolute and sincerest pleasure Mr, Noodle sir & I sure hope she does xoxo is for her, ju.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

ahahaha! :))))))))) of course they are for her! that spicey Italian poetess.
Very surreal. Great work.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

pleased to meet you Mr. T! it's an oldie written with a very spicy Italian .. Miss Freda .. glad you.. read more
Colorful rainbows you created writing this poem. Good work 👍

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

thanks for taking time Arundass! I appreciate it!
E.
This poem, "Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land," is a captivating and thought-provoking exploration of the psychedelic experience. The use of vivid imagery and poetic language creates a dreamlike atmosphere that draws the reader in and leaves them feeling both enchanted and unsettled. The poem's exploration of altered consciousness through the use of psychedelic mushrooms is both fascinating and thought-provoking, and the use of rhyme and absurdity in the language adds a sense of playfulness and whimsy to the piece. The poem's themes of transformation and rebirth are explored in a way that is both powerful and accessible, making this a poem that is sure to resonate with readers. Overall, "Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land" is a beautifully written and thoroughly engaging poem that is well worth reading.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

9 Months Ago

here you are blessing Frieda and I ... it was such a fun collaboration with her ... thank you again .. read more
Time for a new post from one Einstein Noodle. ~Sharon

Posted 10 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

thanks so much Miss Sharon ... I do appreciate that .. I have lacked passion and inspiration now for.. read more

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