Redundancy

Bold statement

Remind me again
Why?
Why?
Why?
I can't tell the difference
Can I rely?
Rely?
Rely?
Reiy?
On this person that I caIl my friend...
Friend
Friend
Friend
Who has my back?
Over and over again?
Again?
Again?
Again?
If this is the issue
Then how do I know?
No
No
Is it that obvious?
Does the redundancy show?
Show?
Show?
Show?
Or am I nervous because this person
Who has kept me in line
Could leave my side
At any time?
Time?
Time?
Time?
I know you won't
I can't stress that enough

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is the poster child for SHOW instead of tell, as you use repetition to illustrate both your title theme, as well as a "tearing-out-the-hair" sensation from exasperation, perhaps!?!?! Finding friends that we can rely on -- this can be a fruitless venture more often than not! *sigh!* Fondly, Margie

[Laurierose]

Yes! The "tearing-out-the-hair," sensation is something I've imagined as well while reading this. The headache of wonder is strong in search of friendship as we ask ourselves such questions. Thanks for your review!

[Ghost]

I think more people ask themselves this more than we know... I ask it and at same time get mad at myself for doing the leaving... Thank you for sharing such amazing poem

[Laurierose]

Wow thanks for sharing that. Thanks for the review!