Thumbprints

Thumbprints

A Poem by Laurierose
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Take me back

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Place your hand in the sand

And plunge for my heart

Pull the remnants slowly

But don’t tear it apart

 

We’ve laid obstacles to rest

And allowed pieces to fall

When in spring, we’ve settled

Yet no one’s comfortable, at all

 

Offset my needs;

Make me again

Believe

The cool sand is home

With my heart underneath

© 2020 Laurierose


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this is so real....as allegory it works well.
I started imagining back to my days at Rye Beach in Jersey....swimming at the ocean, making castles in the sand...and now i am wondering how many hearts over which I might have been building in that sand.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

6 Months Ago

Such a beautiful thought. It makes me wonder how deep one may have had to dig to hear such heart bea.. read more



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this is so real....as allegory it works well.
I started imagining back to my days at Rye Beach in Jersey....swimming at the ocean, making castles in the sand...and now i am wondering how many hearts over which I might have been building in that sand.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

6 Months Ago

Such a beautiful thought. It makes me wonder how deep one may have had to dig to hear such heart bea.. read more
Our fingers often do the walking and waking. A child's lullaby as they make sand castles and dreams...

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

6 Months Ago

A very oceanic feel...love the sand castles and dreams elements here.

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Laurierose
Laurierose

Durham, NC



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Poet at heart. Romantic by nature. Nature the style. Styled by experiences. Experience this world that is my mind... If interested, check out my book in stores: https://www.amazon.com/Wonderful-.. more..

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