Home is a Feeling

Home is a Feeling

A Poem by Laurierose
"

“You still wonder How I fell for you?” -Moonchild

"

Chocolate moons house

Bright, brilliant wonders

As golden as

The sun

She peeks down at me

And,

Immediately,

I’m warm.

Thoughts of her

Remind me;

She isn’t

Too far

Away.

© 2020 Laurierose


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I love this simple whimsical way of describing the feeling of being home. I totally agree . . . it's more a feeling than a place. Sometimes places get muddied up with bad memories, but the feeling of home is something that can't be sullied. The details you use to paint the feelings are unique & fresh. I love the last sentiment: "she isn't too far away" . . . as how we hold the feeling of being home in our hearts, so it's never far (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

7 Months Ago

This meant the world to me. Thank you kindly, Margie.



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This is so simple yet the impact is amazing! Indeed, home is a feeling

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

1 Week Ago

This makes me happy; thank you for the heartfelt comment!
Home definitely is a feeling more than a place! I felt like for a while the last only person who truly felt this way, and I know they saw home is where the heart is, but your description was better and so beautiful. I love the warm feeling you invoke and even more, I absolutely love the last line.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for such a thoughtful comment. Haven't been as active in a while. Reading this ins.. read more
Colacat

2 Weeks Ago

That makes me so happy I can inspire someone like that. It was my pleasure. (:
the sun is never too far away if we find peace and contentment within our hearts...
we only have to look up....we spend to much time with our eyes and hearts downcast.
nicely expressed,
j.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

7 Months Ago

I found that the sun has many healing properties that warmed more than my hands in adverse weather/t.. read more
I love this simple whimsical way of describing the feeling of being home. I totally agree . . . it's more a feeling than a place. Sometimes places get muddied up with bad memories, but the feeling of home is something that can't be sullied. The details you use to paint the feelings are unique & fresh. I love the last sentiment: "she isn't too far away" . . . as how we hold the feeling of being home in our hearts, so it's never far (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

7 Months Ago

This meant the world to me. Thank you kindly, Margie.

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Added on March 23, 2020
Last Updated on March 23, 2020
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Laurierose
Laurierose

Durham, NC



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