Repurposed-Part Two

Part two.

Going once

Going twice

Love's for sale

Name your price

Keep hands up

Wave promise to the sky

Persistence is key

Only truth will suffice

It's up for grabs

Anyone can bid

There on display, it waits

For that someone whose worth it

Author's Note

Stay tuned ( 2 of 3).

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Nicely creative way to say: "I'm in the race!" I love the way your message has tones of longing, tones of bravely overcoming one's reticence to go forth & find love, which is very true-to-life for how it can feel. One feels vulnerable, like being on an auction block. Love such imagery (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Laurierose]

Wow, you've described my thought process and more! Thanks, Margie.

[Robert Trakofler]

Hello again Laurie:) Great Rhyme and Rhythm and a delightful upbeat energy to this one. But in my ear it somewhat belies the feeling of the lines of which I enjoy very much... the contrasting of tone to tome. and the ending punchline frames the melodic in a stark manor, underlining the message. I call this clever and very sincere

[Laurierose]

Yes, I opted for the urgency factor in this piece. It felt more true to the message. I have enjoyed reading your musings! Thank you!

[Moonie]

The quick line breaks really build up momentum for the poem! Nicely done :)

[Laurierose]

Thank you for the kind review!!