I'm A Hopeless Romantic

I know I'm a hopeless romantic
But I just can't stand it!
The way you look at him,
The way he looks at you,
I know you were made for each other
And soulmates are a rare find, it's true
I know I'm a hopeless romantic
But I just can't stand it!
The way you look at him,
The way he looks at you,
The way your loving looks make my heart cringe
You know it's true
I know I'm a hopeless romantic
But I just can't stand it!
The way you look at him,
The way he looks at you
I know I would never split my best friend up
But it's the only thing that I can do
I know I'm a hopeless romantic
But I just can't stand it!
The way you look at him,
The way he looks at you,
Can't you see it?
I'm in love with him too!
Can't you see it?
Your breaking my heart in two!
Can't you see it?
You two were made for each other
And I'm just a shard of broken glass
Can't you see it?
I want you to be happy too,
Can't you see it?
I'm in love with him too
Can't you see it?
He's in love with you too

Author's Note

Ignore grammitical problems....ignore any problems with the poem, really. I suck at writing....

Reviews

[Julius Whimbird]

I can see the torment that the narrator is going through in your poem. I can feel the pain that courses through him/her. How can I do this? By reading the words. The words of this poem have sent me the images and made my heart cringe a litte. This is a little bit opposite to my poem that refers to a hopeless romantic... or rather the target of hopeless romanticism. Anyway, it's very interesting and I do not see much of a problem with it grammar-wise nor spelling-wise.

[NicoRide]

Ya.... I made this poem when me and my friend were crushing on the same guy, even though I knew what I felt towards him wasn't true love.... X3
It just seem to fit the poem better.... X3X

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is great! :) Great job!

[No name]

Very nice poem, the feelings of pain and sadness are coming through and some where deep down I think we all have that hopeless romantic moment.