D a r k t u m s a

D a r k t u m s a

A Poem by Dimensija
"

something from the darkest corners

"

darkness, yes, it has taken me over

dragged me down below your footsteps

and

 

killed me killed me

kill me, please, stop tourchering me

 

I DON'T NEED YOUR LOVE ANY MORE

only the disease, the scourge that's within you

I need your sweatty, scarred soul

your depraved body and obscene words

 

stop talking, I CANNOT TAKE IT ANY LONGER => DEATH => YOU ARE HAUNTING ME

© 2009 Dimensija


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I find this work a bit depressing. I can understand the tone and the image but the work doesn't flow well to me. I think that you could use more input with less stress on "Kill". I do like the work. I look forward to more of your work.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Dimensija
Dimensija

Latvia, United Kingdom



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