A bird that doesn't fly away

please listen

 

be a bird

 

but such a bird

 

that doesn't fly away

 

nest in my hands

 

be my fingers

 

let me be your wings

 

no questions please

Reviews

[Emily B]

I think you said it all. No more need for words. You said it all so beautifully.

[Collect-Eye]

your spirit held your hand in those last two lines
whispered in my ear something I can't remember
I recall my reaction, but the lesson is yours alone

[Anya]

I love this poem, so simple but so deep :)

[a]

I agree with Red Raven... short and sweet, a glimpse of hope in our dark-lighted everyday life.
Thank you!

[John McGrael]

i enjoyed reading this, it was good!!
it really speaks to me u know

the last line made me smile

[Red Raven]

Short and sweet.
Can read the desire and yearn that is well hidden inside.
It's a very catchy title :O)

RedRaven

[Bud]

I like this. Thanks for sharing.