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Forces are pushing us
to evolve.
That’s the only step
some people can resolve,
since we didn’t inherit
anything from the old.

Let’s push forward
with our lusts
and fix our eyes
to look above…

..to accomplish something far beyond.

With empty pockets
and high hopes.
The cause isn’t lost,
it just evolved to
better cope with
this new world.

Reviews

[NA]

Interesting thoughts, very thought provoking ...makes me wonder what the future will hold in this new world :)

[Leandro Mendez]

"the future is uncertain"..-Jim Morrison.. thank you! :)

[Another Poet]

Woow I really like the last line. I wait for a better world and you wrote that perfect in your poem!

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you! :)

[Another Poet]

:)

[B-poet]

Very inspiring and thought provoking. A compelling write and read. :)

[Leandro Mendez]

thanks so much my friend :)