I Am....Dust

An old piece I found in a folder along with many others from back when I was just getting started. Not one of my best. Nothing major, but has a point.

I Am....Dust

 

 

    The winds that turn

The centuries

    Claim me not!

 

     Time conquers all

Within its grasp

     But takes me not!

 

     I am forever.

       I am....

         Dust!

 

Legion

25AUG08

    

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

You may thing this isn't one of your best, but I really liked it. The sands of the sea and the dust of the ground will be for as long as the world does. It was short and to the point.


Time conquers all

Within its grasp

But takes me not!



The hands of time can march on and on, but dust is still dust, always the same.

[GetTheHellOut]

Great work. A very nice piece, so true...

[Master Morality]

How true....
Me - coming to an overlooked shelf near you!

[Anarda Nashai]

...and we are ALL dust, ultimately. Individual particles, vunerable to being wisked away by time...at any moment. Your poem is very inspiring...I love it!!!!!

-Anarda Nashai
author of Despondent
Check out my website at:
www.anardanashai.webs.com

[Kevin Andros]

This is really nice. We all are dust and will be dust one day. Very true peice. ~KA~

[O!]

So we always exist for we've made our mark in history eh?!

nice!

x,
O!