Period

Battling the silence of the muses. I have mustered this.

Period

 

 

 

Comma,

I have given pause to you

within this life

and have contemplated,

nay, Questioned this mark

I have made upon

this world that continues

its Exclamation, its point,

in which I find no comfort,

nor confirmation

and thus end,

not within this single moment,

but within nothing more

than this Period.

 

Legion

07NOV08

Reviews

[Dinesh Sairam]

I once thought there wasn't much to punctuations. But since the day I realized the little magic they can create, I've been always using them -- quite cautiously!

And this one, is just one refreshing read. Kind of, off-beat poetry; but not very poetic as your other pieces: Prose poetry? Maybe!

Keep writing.

[StrawberryDream]

This is unbelievably good! Definitely will return back to it time and time again! Perfect. :) I adore the concept and execution...

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Dope!!! I love the creativity in this piece. Very funny and entertaining......

[J.Black]

Outstanding. This was composed and constructed to perfection. Can you say witty, unique and creative?

[Love Struck]

One word: compelling. Your writing is interesting because it can mean several different things to several different people, despite what message you have in mind. In my opinion, this is a good thing, and it means that you have an extraordinary sense of reality. It gives your writing depth. Thumbs up!

[A.R. Freeman]

I love the complexity and wittiness of the poem. Very unique and original.

[Gandré]

You called comma into question - this was hilarious & wonderful small poem! Expressing dwelling on a thought, what happened in fragments of a second - in a creative philosophical poem; yes you are right, such an accuracy is important, like compassing the doubt. Thanks for taking time and reading that new piece. Hope all is well. happy new year.

[Spit_and_Prayers]

Witty, and original. In short I like it. You took a few punctuation points and turned it into a poem which actually seems to characterize writing a bit. Well done with a quasi-modernist approach.

[Mariah]

Wow. No one writes like this anymore. It makes the piece unique and memorable.

Kudos.

[D.L. Holmes]

Very witty!
I enjoyed this quite a bit. I even read it out loud to a friend over the phone.
Great write.

[Moii]

Your writing to me is very unique and the meaning of these piece is great, well done :)