War

War

A Poem by Ina Waltz

Men used to fight out of need
now they fight out of greed

© 2013 Ina Waltz


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Short and powerful

Posted 11 Years Ago


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well said

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Your brevity takes nothing away from the truthfulness in this piece. Spot on and well done.

-kimmer

Posted 11 Years Ago


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can't say truer than that

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Extremely short and simple yet extremely true. Those two sentences pretty much sum up society today. This poem may benefit from two extra lines, but that's your call to make. Short, sweet, and to the point. Very well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Ina Waltz
Ina Waltz

Zagreb, -- Please Select --, Croatia



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I write poetry and short stories. I also draw and paint abstract images that my mind creates in order to understand the world and myself. I cannot live without creative outlet; when I don't write/pain.. more..

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