Time

Time

A Poem by Leonard Birch
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I love time, but often there isn't enough hours in the day.

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Time

 

Time

How the hours pass quickly.

Time

My every breath is measured.

Time

I tolerate her strike.

Time

It’s night.

© 2013 Leonard Birch


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Ted
Sounds and feels like some sort of haiku, short but with great depth.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Leonard Birch

10 Years Ago

Thanks Ted. I really appreciate it.

Cheers
I like the brevity here - definitely adds to the notion of time being so short. Great piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Leonard Birch

10 Years Ago

Thanks Rita. Yes 24 hours a day isn't long enough. I need 48.
All the best
Leo
Wow . What a great write with unique lines ...The ending was sooo good too... Thank you for penning ...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Leonard Birch

10 Years Ago

Thanks Sami. I am glad you like it. Cheers.
Leo
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

I did . You are wekcome...:)
Liked it because i hated it. LOL this is not a contrasting view. I liked the way how the time is made fun of.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Leonard Birch

10 Years Ago

Thanks Angel for your feedback. Cheers!
Leo

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Added on July 31, 2013
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Tags: poem, time, clock, tick, hours, hours in a day

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Leonard Birch
Leonard Birch

Albany, Western Australia, Australia



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