Broken Box of Spiders

Spiders or the past

Why should I care about the past ?

a broken box of spiders.

Why should I admire such a lot of paint ?

rain is just a lot of water, the sun a light

that is thin in winter, and the rest expected -

comfortable and lazy to the eye.

Let me climb out of a ditch next to a road,

sniff the night air, a damaged seed.

Reviews

[allie_arrowz]

i like how you ask yourself questions. though there doesn't seem to be an answer to them
"rain is just a lot of water" i like that.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Some things we wish we could just forget as they are unpleasant like spiders can be. Powerful imagery in this poem. Things and situations not so nice. I enjoyed your poem.

[quinfinn]

this is gritty, intense and beautiful all at the same time...very cleverly written and brilliantly expressed.

[Ken Simm.]

So many questions but then as Emily said it is so right. Always questions never answers. Superb piece.

[Emily B]

perfect words for a day like today