Heliotrope

Heliotrope

A Poem by Leslie Philibert
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After a pause a short poem

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stepping at the sun
with written ankles
our lips divided

the sun profiled two faces
passing a warm stone

© 2020 Leslie Philibert


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Sensational as always...your poetry has the impact of summer after a long eclipse, so very beautiful Leslie! :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Subtle and thought-provoking. Because it's not just two lovers kissing in sunset... it goes deeper, in my percpective. The kiss might have been an exchange of goodbyes, stones might feel warm but they're also hard and you choke on them. The stone to me also felt like a sickness being pass from the person to the other. Written ankles was the most powerful line for me. Shackles of destiny and pre-written events.

Love the sweetness in the brevity!
Thanks for sharing.
Never stop writing.
~Aysha.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Short, but so vivid. I love it.

Posted 8 Months Ago


the poetry written on our faces, the lyrics through parting lips.
a kiss as we pass that warm stone...two faces blending into one love.

Posted 8 Months Ago


short and relatable,enjoyed

Posted 8 Months Ago


Nice write. The first line alone was powerful, but you followed it up well. tyfs

Posted 8 Months Ago


Very simple and lovely. .

Posted 8 Months Ago


Oh how much I have missed your ability to offer such profound poetry filled with pathos and images in so few words. A sunflower type experience that appears to separate two people but there still remains such warm memories.

Posted 8 Months Ago



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Leslie Philibert
Leslie Philibert

Bavaria, Germany



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