Weltschmerz

waiting

The train arrives late.

It is full of animals.

A late moonday. Not much Sun.

We stand as actors.

There are big voices above us.

Faces fall at our feet.

Many skies crash together.

It is a terrible affliction to be scared

of something you love.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yet another breath-taking piece. It feels like the protagonist is afraid of life itself. How helpless we are.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"It is a terrible affliction to be scared
of something you love."

very interesting words here!

[Sami Khalil]

We stand as actors
there are big voices above us...
Nice concept and write...

[Stanley Wilson]

very cleverly written

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Yes, the starkness of this piece and the images used do bring about
a sense of menace and of something not quite right.
I can see the reason for fear.

[Droll Prole]

Truly a horrible feeling but a great poem!