Another Rainy Night I Suffer

a lot of rain here...

Sunk in the sodden wetlands

we wade through pools of glass

wet smoke and begging loam,

a sudden rain,warm as a child`s palm

as young fish we tumble in running brooks,

seas in our eyes, the flood

pulls us darkly under the moon

the rain a s**t at every corner;

dark as the night is water.

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

The kind of piece that tends to short-circuit the mind and speak directly to the soul.
Outstanding work, Leslie!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, " as young fish we tumble in running brooks"
and

"the rain a s**t on every corner"

wicked lines...such dreariness captured with such clarity and brilliant phrasing.

[zainul]

Wonderful gem.
I do not know the art of cutting a gem.
So,left the uncut dazzling diamond in my heart.:)

[emmajoy]

So true, but never so well described.. strong phrases, distinct feelings, '.. .. pulls us darkly under the moon ~ the rain a s**t at every corner; ~ dark as the night is water.'

[Stefon Napier]

Talk about feeling everything! Excellent way to open up our senses. Very strong piece.
I was floating, Philibert wanted me to drown. I did and I loved it. Happy I got to read this piece.

[PP]

Very intense and I like the picture you've painted..great work Leslie :)

[Ken Simm.]

Atmospheric. Remarkable imagery. Excellent write. Oh and wet.....

[Emily B]

sometimes the weather gets sideways, the sun will shine again though

[Sami Khalil]

I bit dark but I like it a lot...:)

[Frieda P]

Perfect, we've been getting lots of rain too, think you guys sent it from across the pond. Ha

'the rain a s**t at every corner' killer line....