Welcome To hell

Burn!!

I want them all to burn!

I crave for their screams!

To hear them beg for forgivness.

I'm out for blood.

Their tears mean nothing to me!

I have no pity for the damned.

Yes..Yes..Yes...

Oh the sweet saticfaction.

I can almost taste their fear.

Its like my own personal drug.

Scream!

I want to hear you scream!

More..More..MORE!!

They will be mine for eternity.

Forever they will burn!

Welcome To Hell B*****s hahahahaha

 

 

Author's Note

I have no idea what was going through my head when i wrote this...no more funny tasting water for me

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

: ) It's not so bad down here. It gets a little warm and we get to choose what happens to the person who follows us down here, so there is always some sort of musing qualities to be had. Was your inspiration something short of what road rage would be?! lol I Loved it..... L.I.P. Live in peace because it's Hell on Earth. ; ) xoxo -Mark

[Secret Lullaby]

hahaha I was just super pissed off:) yeah I heard the weather is nice down there at this time of year:))))

[Patrick Henry]

Nice!! It's about 89 degrees, air condition isn't working, and it's 11:50pm. If there were showers in Hell.... I'm game. lol My best friends probably went to Hell..... : ) xox -Mark

[Secret Lullaby]

hahaha

[Patrick Henry]

Road trip!! lol Wouldn't it be sweet to be the "Peter at the Gates" version, but down in Hell where you get to see the bullies and/or ones that you knew and deserved to be there in that moment, and you get to ...nudge them along into Hell's Gate?! : ) ...even get a poker. xxo -Mark

[Secret Lullaby]

That..Would..Be..AWESOME!!!!!!!! It would be like a "payback b***h" moment!

[Patrick Henry]

I vote YES on "payback B***h"!! : ) Maybe, even play a little 80's rock ballad music in the background when all they see are our smiles. lol Definitely awesome!! xox -Mark

[Time's The Bond]

Cruel... I LOVE IT!! May I taste the fear with you?

[emmy bon]

Lol... Rage moment haha

[Secret Lullaby]

oh you have NO idea

[Personne]

Well, we all have those moments where we are angry at the world, haha(: I could definitely relate, goodness gracious. Thank you for this poem, kinda let me blow off some steam(:

[LittleLover]

Sad thing is i thought of someone when reading this haha :P
Yeah, it seems we all have that one person that if they randomly died so tragically, we wouldn't care. Or if we don't all have that, i do lol
But good job, i like it

[That_Guy]

Note to self, stay on her good side

[Secret Lullaby]

haha that might be a good idea(:

[Alejandra]

This actually made me laugh a bit. But not in a bad way. It reminded me of someone. very well written. Kinda creepy. But I like it. :)

[Ella]

O.o ...hm... is it bad that this reminds me of a song? XD Actually two, What Lies Beneath and Unknown Solider by Breaking Benjamin
Anyways, I LOVE this, fire makes me happy and this paints a beautiful picture of it :) You can really feel the raw emotions through this poem.

[WinterIce<3]

Very creative and very good imagery

[C.C. Marx]

maliciously descriptive. I like the imagery!

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

very Menacing and creative;)