Blue Eyes

Blue Eyes

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

Blue eyes,

Full of lies,

Every time she cries,

Her heart slowly dies.

 

© 2014 Secret Lullaby


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Sad but dark

Says a lot in just a few lines well said

Posted 3 Years Ago


Amazing lines, full of emotions. Hope to see you return to WritersCafe soon. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Haha! Lovely .. I love this one...everybody wants to get swum into the blue eyes but yeah, blue are ..full of lies ..lol but you know what? People still love to get swim into those blue eyes all night with smiles just for saying at an end of the night ..Beautiful Goodbyes :) Haha ..How funny .. I adore this shorty piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


S**t..
THis is powerful stuff you're playing around with..
Good job!

100/100

Fallen

Posted 10 Years Ago


It says a lot in those 4 lines. I like that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


four verses, few words ... sublime poetry ! Great metrica, great rhythm, great images, simple but full os pathos, it's simply amazing.
Great job !

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love it. Such a short poem can have deep meaning.
In the last line is "lowly" supposed to be "slowly"?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Good rhyming pattern. Great Job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice Rhyming, I like it!

Keep Up The Good Work

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 17, 2014
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Secret Lullaby
Secret Lullaby

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