Blue Eyes

Blue Eyes

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

Blue eyes,

Full of lies,

Every time she cries,

Her heart slowly dies.


© 2014 Secret Lullaby

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Sad but dark

Says a lot in just a few lines well said

Posted 3 Years Ago

Amazing lines, full of emotions. Hope to see you return to WritersCafe soon. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago

Haha! Lovely .. I love this one...everybody wants to get swum into the blue eyes but yeah, blue are ..full of lies but you know what? People still love to get swim into those blue eyes all night with smiles just for saying at an end of the night ..Beautiful Goodbyes :) Haha ..How funny .. I adore this shorty piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago

THis is powerful stuff you're playing around with..
Good job!



Posted 10 Years Ago

It says a lot in those 4 lines. I like that.

Posted 10 Years Ago

four verses, few words ... sublime poetry ! Great metrica, great rhythm, great images, simple but full os pathos, it's simply amazing.
Great job !

Posted 10 Years Ago

I love it. Such a short poem can have deep meaning.
In the last line is "lowly" supposed to be "slowly"?

Posted 10 Years Ago

Good rhyming pattern. Great Job

Posted 10 Years Ago

Nice Rhyming, I like it!

Keep Up The Good Work

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on January 17, 2014
Last Updated on January 21, 2014


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