why did you have to go

why did you have to go

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

 

 

I will miss you forever,

I need you now more then ever,

Why did you have to go

 

You were so young,

what have you done!!!!

Why did you have to go

 

Why did your life have to end,

When it should have been ready to begin

Damn why did you have to go

© 2012 Secret Lullaby


Author's Note

Secret Lullaby
i lost a close friend last night ); He was 16 and he killed himself and now my heart feels like there is HUGE hole in the middle

TO EVERY TEEN: plz stop saying you want 2 kill yourself!!! stop complaneing about how your life sucks or parents dont understand you..or that you lost the love of your life.
Becuse guess what...we are still young and we have PLENTY of time to figure this shit out!!! life is tuff and sommetimes its going to suck but THATS life...its not always going to be perfect...and sometimes its going to feel like its Hell on earth but all you have to do is stay strong and WANT to live!!! Live for your family,live for your friends,live for the people that care SOOOO much about you but most important...live for YOU!!! you may be suprised to find how many people really do love and care about you,even if u dont like yourself...so PLZ PLZ PLZ stop trying to emd your life and start trying to LIVE life..I wish that nobody had to feel the way me and his family do right now
R.I.P Kyle

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Very touching poem. Strong words and strong emotions.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ohmygosh, this is a wonderful poem! I think you did a fantastic job with it and it has a great lesson behind it. (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think you have written a wonderful lament here,It managed to touch me and i have become jaded to just about everything on earth.You captured a complexity with a minimal amount of words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


IM very sorry about your friend you did make a great poem very well written and sad as well

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm sorry about your friend... I've never lost a friend, but I can feel the pain you feel through your words. Very touching. I'm sorry this has happened to you...

Ever need to talk, you can talk to me. I'll listen.

Peace.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really love your poem.It is really powerfull and emotional.I am sorry about your friend.

What have you wrote in your note is very true and I agree with it.I still do wonder why a lot of young people take away their lifes.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its hard to stop..... unless you have a reason to....

Posted 12 Years Ago


So very true and so meaningful. I, too, have lost dear friends this way and reading this brings heartfelt memories. I wish they could have understood this message before they chose to end their life. I'm sorry about your friend. Thank you for this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


quite touching poem

Posted 12 Years Ago



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