Prince of Paradise

Prince of Paradise

A Story by Secret Lullaby

 

 

Even the damned

Shall stand

As he falls.

 

The prince of Paradise

Has finally payed the price

Hell now calls.

 

His wicked ways

And deadly hase

Has cuased his demise.

 

About his black wings,

The angels sings

Hopeing that never again he shall rise

 

For the prince of Paradise

Has answerd the damned's  cries

And rule in Hell till the end of time

© 2012 Secret Lullaby


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Secret Lullaby
i was reading a book and thought of this...idk if it is good or not so plz tell me what you think

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haha i freaking love this great wrire keep them coming :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Interesting. The beginning built up strength, which carried through to the end. I like the format, with the A-A-B rhyme scheme, which isn't common. Very nice. Thank you.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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It a new year and a new me. I have deleted my old information and have decided to start over. Life is full of ups and downs, disapointments, regrets, mistakes...but all these things make us who were a.. more..

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