Blackened Soul

Dark, might upset some people.

Like twisted baited worms,
who's flesh is impaled with hard wire turnings.
I take the cold diseased  heart from rotted corpses
and feed it into the mouths
of b*****s with engorged vagina  yearnings.

The reckless sanctimonious righteous
evaporate from the earth
and like an undetected steam
burn the faces of those
who are too blind to see.
Transcended evil scum
swirl the paths of souls
as they try to make their way
deep into the psyche. 

Never a power to be,
man trapped by his own arrogance,
by his own greed,
instead of infiltrating the cosmic mind of God,
crushes his flesh,
crushes his spirit.
Dare not be the one to hold the mirror,
take sticks for script,
land scribbles in the sand
as to expose your soul for wretched redistribution.

Deity and piety hold tight
like gravitational glue
on every thought conceived by mortal man,
In giant prisons they are locked for eternity
and hold the secrets yet untold.
No man is great,
 who feeds on the flesh of others,
for essential nutrients flow
and percolate into our mother.

There is a flesh that feeds the soul,
it is impossible to find and
therefore does not exist.
There is a thought,
 a spoken word,
 a transcribed verse
that makes it so,
but man will damn it all to hell.

Reviews

[Doreen]

Feed the counterfeit with the food of a justice well served. The bullshit of the masses be gone as each of the guilty screams of innocence while fattening by his own gluttony. There exists a utopia, a perfection - let not man find it for he will certainly make sure that it crumbles. If only man kind could understand and therefore change, but, unfortunately, as much as enlightenment is an idea whose time has come, it will never come to pass. This is going into my favorites. Nice work.

One small thing - in line 7 of the 4th stanza:
"who feeds on the flesh others, "...flesh OF others.

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Offended? No.
Mazeltov to all those who have managed to turn their "Blackened Soul" the other way.

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

why people would have a problem with this i do not know. it is truthful and well just a great write. Amazing witing, good imagery, and the flow is nice. :)

[Vanessa Rico]

I completely agree with Neva. It is very dark, but it is well written.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Wow! That first stanza is beyond dark. Yes, so often man attempts and succeeds at crushing the spirit of his fellow man. We create our own happiness and we are the ones who allow others to take it from us. It cannot be taken, it has to be given. Well penned verse.