Forsaken

Forsaken

A Poem by Lexie James

In the cold, neglected night

A  strange dark figure roams insight

Frosty, ice,  a spec of light

Surrounds an unholy sight

 

Spinning, whirling

Round and round

Soaring, falling

To the ground

 

An isolated presence here

Moves around, for us to hear

Lost within a whirl wind hole

Forsaken, pain, a lonely soul

© 2009 Lexie James


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Awesome piece... short but catchy with a nice dark undertone.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Excellent imagery! Great job...you ROCK !

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dark and forbearing. I can feel the loneliness in this writing. nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 3, 2009
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