Seven Deadly Sins

Seven Deadly Sins

A Poem by Pookie
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Wrath is the worlds most deadlyist sin there is. Guns, Pain, Death = Wrath.

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Wrath

Wrath can be wanting to hurt another, to bring pain to lover or a hated one. Wrath is thy deathlyist sin because it may bring death to thy table.

It can bring even more pain to the one that is put their Wrath on another. Wrath is what makes Earth the most deadlyist planet in the cosmos.

 Wrath is the yang to the yin which is peace to the rest of the world.

 With out Wrath the world will be in more chaos then what it is now. Wrath is what makes the world go 'round.

Can we go on feeding on evil for long? Will we ever find our way out of this darkness?

We'll for ever be in this darkness, this blanket of Wrath.

 The blanket of pure evil.

Wrath

© 2009 Pookie


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I always believed in that too .. hurting someone or even breaking a heart is really a deadly sin

You described it beautifully in this written piece
I absolutely loved these lines:

" Wrath is the yang to the yin which is peace to the rest of the world.
With out Wrath the world will be in more chaos then what it is now. Wrath is what makes the world go 'round."

So true, great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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very very well done and descriptive piece.... like the way you handle the sins and wanted to hear more.... nice job on this..

Posted 13 Years Ago


I hope to read about the other deadly sins......I think you would do a good job on them as well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Amazing!!!!!!!! I loved it very interesting.I guess my deadly sin is sloth.but this was great i wanna read more of your poems.cant wait!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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yeah like the law of equivalant exchange, as my budy would say. may i ask is that ur favorite sin. and it was a good write.

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I always believed in that too .. hurting someone or even breaking a heart is really a deadly sin

You described it beautifully in this written piece
I absolutely loved these lines:

" Wrath is the yang to the yin which is peace to the rest of the world.
With out Wrath the world will be in more chaos then what it is now. Wrath is what makes the world go 'round."

So true, great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 17, 2009

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