A Poem by Pookie

You know that feeling? When you're in love? It feels like it's not suppose to happen, only in your dreams? Well this is like this. "Love SucKs"


Things like this NeveR Fade.

Ice cream as no affect, now. The pieces turn to sand, their blown away, NeveR to be seen again.

My Heart will NeveR be whole again.

It will ForeveR be broken, youR love can't fix it. Unless you tell me youR true FeelingS.

But Until then, I'll be alone and scared of This  darkness that is trying to consumE me.

ThingS like this NeveR Fade.

I miss youR touch.

I had to do it FoR us. 

We Can'T be seen TogetheR.

They'll know somethinG is wronG.

But I'll NeveR let you gO.

YouR touch makes my HearT accelerate, Goose bumps rise on my skin when you move away. Yearning FoR youR touch.

I get butterflies when my name passes through youR lips.

My knees get weak when you bite youR bottom lip and look at me with that loving look.

The way youR arms are around me.


The sun rises and this dream is over. 

Us, both wishing we could go back to it.


The sun goes down, anotheR night approaches, our dream comes alive again.

Hands in twined, eyes locked, skin boiling, breath ragged, lips moist.

"Skyler," he whispers, his breath ghosting down my neck from the love bite he left me.

His hands roam my torso, Goose bumps when heated skin meets, big, rough hands.

I suck a deep breath, my hands run through his hair.

"Xaviier," I whisper, he skins his teeth into my collar bone, I bit my bottom lip to keep from screaming out, showing him weakness. 

He lays small love bites and kisses along my neck and chest. My head is swimming, forgetting anyone is in the house.

He whispers loving, and soothing words in my ear. 

I want to tell him how I feel, but it doesn't want to come out.

Feelings are raging, body heat flaring. 

I need to tell him! I MUST find out if he feels the same. All these years I've been wanting to know.

I want the truth.

Love SucKs...


© 2009 Pookie

Author's Note

Just something I though up in math class and that has happened in my current life. Lol. Details, Details. Lol.

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I absolutely love originality. I haven't read a lot of what you've written..YET, but this really shows the uniqueness within you. It has a great flow. Each word is filled with your emotions and passion. It feels that you wrote this straight from your heart without stopping to wonder why. I love this. You seem to have held nothing back from this and I admire people that can show this within their words. Thank you for writing this and of course.. thank you for sharing!

Posted 14 Years Ago

this is a really good write.strong emotions

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good piece friend! Really like the imagery and flow of this piece :) Poppy

Posted 14 Years Ago

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very passionate piece.... like the emotionals that you show throughout this piece... a very enjoyable read...

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Added on September 12, 2009
Last Updated on October 13, 2009



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