I Feel the Pain

I Feel the Pain

I want to cry 

I have nothing to gain 

I want to die 

I feel the pain

You watched me fall

You left me be

You heard me call

You ignored me 

They made me break

They told me not to tell

They said I was fake 

They were my hell

We decided fate

We created trouble

We were too late

We made the pain double

I want to die

I went down the wrong lane

I survived 

I feel the pain

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

A lot of pain in this learning curve.

[Amy Rose]

That was probably the best poem I saw out of 20 today, congrats, I felt the emotion :)

[Sami Khalil]

I felt the power of emotions in this write. Bravo................