Storyline

Some older lyrics.

Verse: 

It's 12 o'clock, but you're still up  

As your writing down your story 

The coffee mug, 's your little drug 

And yourself you try to unplug 

You're out of breath, you're out of luck, 

The walls start closing in on you 

You inject yourself, for bloodshot eyes 

Just when everyone's asleep 

Bridge: 

It's whispering inside you 

But your self-conscious is still blind 

You hold onto your past  

While you should leave it all behind 

Chorus: 

That's when you walk 

That's where you crawl 

That's why you rise after you fall 

That's who you are 

And that's whom you'll be 

Tell me why do you see through me 

Verse: 

Hit me as hard, as you can 

Inject me with some friendly morphine 

Bring my senses, to me friend 

Cause I'm drooling loads of white cream 

Scream at the top, of your lungs 

I'm Awake in REM 

And Get me out of this coma 

Cause the stroke must have began 

Bridge: 

It's whispering inside you 

But your self-conscious is still blind 

You hold onto your past 

While you should leave it all behind 

Chorus: 

That's when you walk 

That's where you crawl 

That's why you rise after you fall 

That's who you are 

And that's whom you'll be 

Tell me why do you see through me 

Bridge: 

It's whispering inside you 

But your self-conscious is still blind 

You hold onto your past 

While you should leave it all behind 

Chorus: 

That's when you walk 

That's where you crawl 

That's why you rise after you fall 

Yet I can’t get 

Why you see through me 

Tell me am I that hard to read 

Tell me am I that hard to read  

Reviews

[BlackStar]

Where have you been keeping this? WOW..honestly, it's so good, so well penned that I'm going to have to think well to actually write a good review about this!

[Ĺυ¢куĎυ¢ку]

that was incredible! i loved it! i can hear it in my mind and it sounds awesome :D

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

This amazing. I rewally enjoyed this. INcredible! the flow is perfect and i can hear someone singing or reading these words.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. The flow and the set-up made the poem/music stronger. Life is a test and we must go forward. I like the positive feel of this poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Chantel]

I like this a lot, especially the first verse...and the chorus too, actually. I would love to hear this someday, it seems like it would be really good, one of those songs you almost want to put on repeat, you know?
Keep writing :)