Over Here

Well I've just met you

And I'm amazed

I haven't had a crush

In the past few years

And I don't know

What I like about you

Your eyes, your hair, your smell

And most things you do

Cause when I talk to you

My heart races

And the butterflies you give me

Scatter in different places

And if only I could catch one

Just a single line to win you

But you're too busy to see

..Me

Like in the old cartoons

When I do heroic stuff

You're looking the other way

At that guy "all buff"

I missed those thoughts

Before I sleep

Where I wonder

If it's me you're thinking of

Cause when I talk to you

My heart races

And the butterflies you give me

Scatter in different places

And if only I could catch one

Just a single line to win you

But you're too busy to see

..Me

So if this life should be a tale

All this hard work shouldn't lead to fails

This time I'll give faith a helping hand

Cause maybe, I might have found you.. in the end

And when I talk to you

My heart races

And the butterflies you give me

Scatter in different places

And if only I could catch one

Just a single line to win you

But you're too busy to see

..Me

I'm over here.

Reviews

[Horizons]

An emotional song, A loving song, A beautiful song and moreover a song that come from the heart for someone i read today in a suite of a poem. I enjoyed reading this song. The feelings of heart you've pasted here into the words.. Well expressed poem/song. All stanzas're nice and beautifully penned up. "Over Here" title's good and it creates suspense to a reader before reading the poem.. but after read it out it became a peace of piece. Brilliant job.

[NightTime]

Very wonderful poem..thumbs up

[Harmonica winds]

wonderful emotions set free, beuatiful and so lyrical : )

[......]

I really enjoyed this write, like the deepness, wonderful write

[Stacey Watts]

Very well written and very sweetly expressed. This is a wonderful piece.

[Emrick]

I like the way u repeated those stanzas.i was singing along like it were a chorus in a song.
Nice poem.