Icy Lockdown

Icy Lockdown

A Poem by Limitality
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The ice outside gave me some ideas...

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Frozen in time,

what you did should be a crime.

This time it's different, theres no pain,

no game,

not one feeling.

Is this healing?

I don't understand, for no emotion is intact,

that is a fact.

I can't seem to get a grip on this,

theres not even one thing that I miss.

No relief, no sorrow,

will there be tomorrow?

I'm unsure of the future,

What if I finally became an unemotional creature?

What has become of me?

There isn't a way to see,

I'm totally, completely, unsure.

Is there a cure?

Can it be, I finally cracked, finally gone insane?

Is there anything to gain?

White winter, beautiful snow,

I can't take a step forward to go.

I'm frozen in place,

I can't even pace.

The cool, deathly, air swirls around,

while my feet remain stuck to the ground.

The winter may be cold, but it isn't the weather that has a grip on my heart.

It's gone into an Icy Lockdown.

© 2009 Limitality


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that was pretty cool! I like the idea you came up with just by looking at the outdoors.
Anyway great write thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 15 Years Ago


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