Forever

Forever

A Poem by Limitality
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A dream I had one to many times...

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I watched myself for so long,

fall apart.

Again and again I would cry myself to sleep-

No one was there for me.

And one day, there he was,

like a shining star in a middle of a dark, wet cave;

Waiting for me.

As if it was the most natural thing in the world,

he took my hand, and I smiled up at him.

He smiled in return, and for the first time in a long time;

I could breathe.

He wrapped his arms around me, and pulled me close.

Then, gently whispered-

"I wish this could last forever."

And I woke up.

 

© 2009 Limitality


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I liked this poem, its raw and emotional. Very well written and it shows everything you could feel in a dream without having to write pages of explanation.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I love the last night. It was devastating to me.
Awesome. =3

Posted 15 Years Ago


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