walk

Let me walk out onto the street
then it will be complete.

Author's Note

Complete

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Well penned my friend... short and simple :)

[B]

All it takes is a walk
And good luck accompanies a walking man :)

[dan]

Another way of saying, "World, here I come!" The street may be complete, but where will you now take it? take care...dan

[Willard Wells]

A statement of fact and in short verse. Well done.

[Roxie M]

Yes, it will! I like it very much! It make one think about it!

[Perkele.7885]

Ok! Which will then be complete? The walk; or the street? I do not know to which noun the word 'it' refers!
There certainly is not a lot of meat to bite into with this poem; thankfully, I have some cheesy crackers!