What's Wrong? What's Write?

My thoughts. They're very "rambly" and disorganized these days.

What’s Wrong? What’s Write?

 

Comfort

Come forth,

Come first

Come fourth.

 

Come clean

Come see,

Come land

Come sea.

 

Rejoin

Your mind,

Your space

Your time.

 

Own mine

What’s yours,

Fits well

Old sores.

 

Old hat

Old socks,

Old crib

Still rocks.

 

Leave home

Return,

Re-twist

Re-turn.

 

Old top

Still spins,

Closed eyes

Peek in.

 

Begs on

Come in,

Wonders

You been?

 

I win

You do,

I pay

You due.

 

Ask not

What’s right

What’s wrong?

What’s write?

Reviews

[Steve]

I can relate to this........ I have a short attention span and no patience for boring things...... Good job of capturing that.

[GTVile]

Wow, this one made me think. I love it.

[Devons]

Really nicely rhythmic and entertaining. A see-saw of a poem with meanings tilting across and back in a very magnetic way.
And "What's write?" is evidently what this is doing. "What's wrong?" Not much.
Good stuff.

[J.A.N]

Great write.

I love this.

[David W Moore III]

Like Dr. Suess, more grown up. I love the romp through linguistic twistings. Nicely done.