A Poem by Pixieblue

Up on the rooftops, caving in.

If im not in my house,
it doesn't mean im not at home.

If im not surrounded by people,
don't just expect that im alone.

If i am not smiling,
It does not mean that i am sad.

If i am dying,
that means that i am glad.

If you can't see me,
do not assume i am not there.

For if you all look closely,
i am dancing in the air.

© 2014 Pixieblue

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I think this has promise, lots of promise and it reminds me of the words I once discovered written on a Kleenex left next to the stereo at a party in 1978....In effect eternally dated... nice

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful.

I can feel pain. I can feel the loneliness.

It jumps in my stomach when I read this.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have one deep and old soul, one can feel from your writing!

Keep writing my friend, this was brilliant!

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wish I could say more but I'm not great with reviews: I loved this piece, short but full of interesting and thought provoking lines, thanks for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

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4 Reviews
Added on October 20, 2014
Last Updated on October 20, 2014
Tags: home, alone, death, assume, air, flutter, bye.



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