Beautiful

People say im committed to my girlfriend by the things i say and write. And thats because i am. This is one of the reasons why.

You're as beautiful as the rising sun

Heart warming and bright, to me you truly are the one.

The one to have by my side

To sit with me and watch the tide.

To lay in bed with to blow time away

To spend my life with till my dying day.

To leave I will never

For I will always love you FOREVER.

Reviews

[LivingDeath]

I wonder about forever too but with this girl, theres no doubt about a forever.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i like this very much......... but is there such thing as FOREVER ??? I wonder...........

[Jane Doe]

flowed amzingly luv it luv u
abiedabbiedoo

[indieRokker]

That was Beautiful. It Flowed well and sweetly.
Amazing!

[Edalene Connell]

That's a sweet poem. Well done.