Christina Maria

Don't get rid of your necklace

don't throw your ring away,

I might not be there now

but I'll be back for you one day.

Keep my heart close by

for it will always remain yours,

when I come sweep you off your feet

we can walk the ocean shores.

I still remember all we shared

with the memories and the moments,

from waking in your little bed

to all our sarcastic comments.

And when we first met 

the excuses we made,

to hold each others hand

our smiles wouldn't fade. 

Underneath those concrete steps

I asked you to be mine,

my life started then 

you made my smile shine.

You made my life worth living

you made me truly smile,

I still love you with all my heart

though we're separated by these miles.

I still remember the spot we found

where we spent every weekday lunch,

right beside the gymnasium doors 

I miss those times so much.

Moments come and go like that

but our memories will remain,

I'll be back for you one day

and we'll make more memories again.

Reviews

[Missing Part]

I wont but I think my mom took the necklace

[Erin_is_peace]

This girl was/is very lucky to have someone whos cares with so much passion as you. Very well written :)

[Alex W]

Very hearftfelt, well done :-)

[Katie Louise Hughes]

This one is very sweet, and you leave your heart out on your shoulder. :)
Keep on writing! :))
Or sleeve, whatever the saying is! LOL

[Sharkapillar]

Well this is cute.
You know, you only have one heart. So how could you have possibly given it away twice, hmm?

~Rabbit~

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is beautiful, but sad because you not with her, i hope that you get to be with her again, so you can be happy once again... great write

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of memories and hope. I like the feel in the story. The description of the good days and the new days of possibilities. A excellent poem. Thank you for sharing your words.
Coyote

[Abhinav]

wonnerful...i loved the feel of this......enchanting stuff....had an element of sadness too, which is something i love to see in poems....
excellent stuff:))

Abby

[Tainted Devotion]

This is simply beautiful and touching. The rhyme was very good. This was written smoothly and effortlessly. I really love this. It put a huge smile on my face, for it reminded me of my own sweet love. You did splendidly with this poem. Wonderfully done. :)

[Keevan]

wonderful and absoluetly beautiful. really amazing poem.