Christina Maria

Christina Maria

A Poem by LivingDeath

Don't get rid of your necklace
don't throw your ring away,
I might not be there now
but I'll be back for you one day.

Keep my heart close by
for it will always remain yours,
when I come sweep you off your feet
we can walk the ocean shores.

I still remember all we shared
with the memories and the moments,
from waking in your little bed
to all our sarcastic comments.

And when we first met 
the excuses we made,
to hold each others hand
our smiles wouldn't fade. 

Underneath those concrete steps
I asked you to be mine,
my life started then 
you made my smile shine.

You made my life worth living
you made me truly smile,
I still love you with all my heart
though we're separated by these miles.

I still remember the spot we found
where we spent every weekday lunch,
right beside the gymnasium doors 
I miss those times so much.

Moments come and go like that
but our memories will remain,
I'll be back for you one day
and we'll make more memories again.

© 2010 LivingDeath

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I wont but I think my mom took the necklace

Posted 11 Years Ago

This girl was/is very lucky to have someone whos cares with so much passion as you. Very well written :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Very hearftfelt, well done :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago

This one is very sweet, and you leave your heart out on your shoulder. :)
Keep on writing! :))
Or sleeve, whatever the saying is! LOL

Posted 11 Years Ago

Well this is cute.
You know, you only have one heart. So how could you have possibly given it away twice, hmm?


Posted 11 Years Ago

this is beautiful, but sad because you not with her, i hope that you get to be with her again, so you can be happy once again... great write

Posted 11 Years Ago

A beautiful poem of memories and hope. I like the feel in the story. The description of the good days and the new days of possibilities. A excellent poem. Thank you for sharing your words.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonnerful...i loved the feel of this......enchanting stuff....had an element of sadness too, which is something i love to see in poems....
excellent stuff:))


Posted 11 Years Ago

This is simply beautiful and touching. The rhyme was very good. This was written smoothly and effortlessly. I really love this. It put a huge smile on my face, for it reminded me of my own sweet love. You did splendidly with this poem. Wonderfully done. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

wonderful and absoluetly beautiful. really amazing poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on March 28, 2010
Last Updated on March 28, 2010



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