Read This If You're Hurt

if anyone else reading this is going through a tough time in their life and need someone to talk to, leave me a message and I'll help as best I can.

If no one else will listen

when all thats left is tears,

when you find it's hard to live

you know I'll still be here.

 

To hold you when you're down

and listen when you speak,

to make you strong again

when you're feeling weak.

 

If someone took your dreams

and broke your heart in two,

I'll bring my string and needles

and fix it till it's new.

 

I'll be here till the end

when theres no light left in days,

if you think you can't go on

I know we'll find our ways.

 

You don't deserve the s**t

when I know you're made of gold,

you can have my jacket

if your life is feeling cold.

 

None of us are angels

but we don't have to live in hell,

I'll help you to your feet

if you've ever fell.

 

If no one else will listen

when all thats left is tears,

when you find it's hard to live

you know I'll still be here.

 

I love you.

 

Reviews

[Teenage Romeo]

The way you are trying to make everyone felll loved no matter who they are is amaxing and i love this and i love you too...

[Liza]

thank you for sharing this with me; the love you describe is caring in action; words finding meaning as love mends and shapes the future with a hopeful beginning.

[YourXArtist]

aww :) i really like that. Definetly made my day much better. great poem ^_^

[Felicity Winter]

Awww thats sweet ^^

[VioletRose]

I can relate to this poem, this is touching...and I really like the fact that your there, and Its amazing to have people like that in the world there isn't many they are just back stabbing b*****s. I love this poem because it has so much meaning. Good job.

[Valentine]

True words caid to a close friend..we all need to be like this and to pick up pieces when a kife is broken..Valentine

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

Beautiful poem!! Very direct and stunning write =)

It gives you hope that someone is always there. I especially liked the following part:

"If someone took your dreams
and broke your heart in two,
I'll bring my string and needles
and fix it till it's new."

I'd love it if someone wrote something like this for me!
Take care of what you have, cause once you lose it, you'll regret it. The person you wrote this to is very lucky to have you around =)

A very heartfelt and touching poem. Your feeling come pouring off the page. the slightest hint of anger is there too. We all need someone. Sadly sometimes we make that mistake that lets the wrong person in to crush our soul. Been there not long ago. Stay strong to the whomever this is for. They have you and that says a lot.

[Krista]

Hm. I don't know what to say. It has alot of meaning to me to be honest. I have been there so so many times. Its not easy to get through a rough time with nobody to talk to. You need someone that you can trust. Someone that you can hold on to while you cry. You need someone that can give you a hug and even a kiss and comfort you through all your pain and suffering..

I have nobody but more than anything I wish I did.