Beneath the Night

Body to body beneath the night

the arch of your back in the pale moon light,

these hands that brush your velvet thighs

will never let you feel goodbye.

One million lights crash into shore

we lay here on this white sand floor,

a kiss for every star we see

the crickets sing to our hearts so free.

But lets take it back for story's sake 

back when hell was all but fake,

when smiles came from razor blades

to give us scars that never fade.

Back when life was all but bright

like our hearts, the black of night,

tormented, abused, never loved

lost all faith in a world above.

But then one day I felt a pain

and from the dark a shadow came,

broke and bleeding from the wrist

my angel whom I once had kissed.

And time went on to sew our hearts

into one another's arms,

initials carved into our soul

healed the scars the past would hold.

Now we lay beneath the night

under stars and pale moon light,

peaceful sleep away from harm

knotted in each others arms. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Color of the Iris]

"Broke and bleeding from the wrist, my angel whom I once had kissed."

[Ashley]

O.O :] THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST POEM I EVER READ! DUDE WHAT??????
AMAZING
1100000/100

[Inyourshadow]

when smiles came from razor blades
to give us scars that never fade.

sometimes the simple acts are the ones that hurt so deeply, beaut imagery of these lines and such dark thoughts adding to end so romantically. Keep em' coming

[Violet]

wow. I really loved this. I don't really know what to say other than it was very well written and made me smile! lovely

[StarryNights]

This poem is excellent and beautiful :) A very good well done indeed!

[Bertie]

Highly romantic and terribly modern in it's approach to love and loss, I just wonder possibly if the idea of scars and razor blades and darkness and angels are in danger of being construed as cliche...
But that's only my personal opinion and it doesn't detract from this being a very touching and moving poem :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Beautiful romantic write. I really enjoyed it.

[Joshua Donahue]

Indescribably beautiful!
The words were chosen so well, the descriptions were so brilliant, and the concept was touching. Mixed together, you have made a true masterpiece my friend!:)

[Rai]

Beautiful.

[Sharkapillar]

Babe this is beautiful. I've read this eighty million times now, I cry every time.
Love you :)