Creepers

Annoying people trying to hit on you?

Creeper me this

and creeper me that

why must you stare

stare from the black. 

Where are your friends

where is your life,

why must you cause

cause me this strife. 

Don't tell me I'm perfect

don't tell me I'm great,

you don't even know me 

don't say that it's fate. 

You're half my own age

and you act to the part,

why don't you go 

before I tear you apart. 

Stick to your friends

or stick to your knife,

what ever your choice 

stay out of my life. 

Author's Note

If you have creepers that wont don't seem to ever leave you alone, read request this to all your friends and lets see if we can get the message across to the people of writerscafe.

Reviews

[Dewella~Vintella]

This was perfectly done. XD I think it gets the message off perfectly, especially "Stick to your friend, or stick to your life."

It had the edgy feel of telling someone to get lost, and also the annoyance and insult that comes with the aspect. Perfect perfect, is all I have to say. ^^

Vinny~

[Lily Mae]

I love this for so many reasons.. it kind of made me chuckle.. there's a whole lot of ego being massaged out there.. xx Excellent write.. :) xx

[Tainted Devotion]

I can relate so much to this. I'm tired of people flocking to me for what ever reason. I don't feel like I've ever really done anything for people to all of the sudden just attach themselves to me. I'm nothing spectacular, and you don't even know me. So don't do that. Sorry, just started bantering. Any way, you really captured how others and yourself really feel about this. Remarkably done although incredibly dark.

[alexis]

This is so true about people at my school.But i guess that everyone has creepers in their life.
good poem.:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Loved it. You penned it perfectly.

[Rae]

Damn. Keep writing.

[Black]

wow so amazing
but pls dont come after me with a knife :P i believe im half your age
lol its getting late, so my weird humor is getting up again

[Plagued Monumentally]

I thought this was extremely creative, and I laughed a couple times at the end. I wonder why you have creepers messaging you, maybe because of your shirtless picture? x]

Anyways, I really loved the creative rhyme scheme you have going on in this poem. Its insulting and creative.