Pencil on paper

About a young lady who tries to write but every time she does she switches places with her character,who is a demon and is suppose kill an angel,but when the switch happens the plot changes!

Millie woke up,with the dreaded thought crossing her head again,''I'll never get the book done!I'll get hunted down and every thing gained will be lost!''She jumped up,causing her two cats to jump with her,not knowing what the hell is going on.''I got to get the story done!''Millie stated standing up,she crossed her arms over her very flat chest and took a huge huff. ''Thats it self I'm going in!''She heard a small concerned 'mewing ' below her feet,Millie looked down to see her two kittens looking up at her like she'd gone mental,''Maybe i have gone insane but that just shows how mush I'm a genius!And that I'm alive!''Announced to her cats.Still replying with concerned 'mewing' Millie gave up,she walked over to her desk and got her papers.Yanning,still in zombie-sleep mode she got her jacket and wallet.''I'll be back when I've got three chapters!'' and with that she closed the door and stepped in the chilly night.She walked with her usual bounce to a rhythmical swing.Finally arriving to her car,she opened the blue care door of her old ''Bug'' car,and stepped in.When she finally coaxed the car to life with small soft warming promises that it will get a new dash board and an oil change,it sprang to life with out trouble.Like all the spunk had never left.Millie shaking her head at the promises realizing the costs sighed and pulled out.Hopefully the book would get finished and she would have enough money to give her car the tender-love-and-care it needed.Millie piled the pencil and paper on the sorry looking dash board,she so overly o busied.''Well i hope Link is working his shift,tonight Zelda,don't you?''Millie asked her car,(that was just like
her cats) questioning her sanity.She hoped her favorite Cafe-tender was on his shift.Millie tried not pick favorites when it comes down to life savers like Link but she could not help it!Link was just her cup-of-tea as he puts it,thou he hates the nick-name she gave him two years ago,he has learned that it will not go a-way.She first meet Nick,when she was driving in the late hours of the night,she pop-ed her tire and drove in on what seemed like a cross between a house and an storage
place.But being full of hope (and other things) she knocked on the strange structure to find that this wounder-less glory was not a house,but an Cafe!That just happens to be open 24/6.She felt love right a-way and thous begun her strange new schedule of going to 'THE EVERYTHING AND ANYTIME CAFE'.She smiled as she slowly eased in-to the all-to filmier parking
spot,that was ''claimed'' her's by every one.Millie got out and skipped to the other side to get the pencil and paper,then locking the car doors,Millie faced the chilly night and entered her favorite spot in town yet.''Hey Mills how are you?I was wondering when you'll show up!''A deep voice called to her as she stepped in-to the Cafe.''Yeah its felt like for-ever since I've been here last!''Millie chuckled at the commitment she made,for it was only two days ago she came in around two-thirty AM,''Millie!How are you?Let me guess the usual?''Said an young voice,Millie turned around and saw Link she smiled and went up and hugged him.''I'm ok,justneed to finish the dam book!' she said sighing,and released Link.''Well i see you guys are busy!''Millie added,smiling maybe she could help and get some ideas then,walking over to the ''Bar'' counter(it just was the place were the coffee is made and there is a place to sit all around it,they really don't serve any thing bear or wine.) pulling out her pencil and paper she pushed back her hair,the long,wavy white-blond hair was some things a hassle,but she managed and pulled it back behind her shoulders.''Here is you're hot chocolate-vanilla-crazy-something random added-to-it drink,and you're big cookie.Link smiled and gave me another hug.He did that a-lot to me,once i asked him and he said he loved the way he felt when he hugged me,it was as if i was a fluffy little angel fallen form the sky.'You really are some-thing' he said once.I smiled and added ''Thank you!'' and went off to try and work.I felt commotion a-rise and decreasing around me,as the sun started to hit the sky.Finally giving up and having a huge major head ace that came hitting me like a death-train,I drained my fourth cup of my drink,and sat it down.Felting some one sit down next to me,I looked up to see Link smiling like no-bodies business,I knew he had some thing he was waiting to ask me.His grin was about the size of soccer-ball,well foot-ball for you American's who don't know the original name.

Author's Note

still adding to it,but so far what do you guys think?

Reviews

[Ophielia Nyx]

You're a quirky writer, not a bad thing at all though.
I like the spunk and the kittens
and much like my self the girl that pulls herself out of bed and talks to herself
i dont care about the grammar it was good and i will read as soon as you add more

[Ophielia Nyx]

I finally read it sorry it took so long.
the more you add to Millie the more i like her.

[Cherie Paregrine Isis]

And sorry for any bad grammar issues,I'm still working on that part!