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A Poem by
Mercury Mirrors
I shouldn’t be here.
I shouldn’t suffer so.
Consumed by fear,
Can’t let you go.
You walk away,
Into the night,
I won’t give sway,
Without a fight.
I want you back.
It’s plain to see.
You want me back.
So what are we.
WAITING FOR!
You love me.
I love you.
You told me.
What I knew.
But you lied.
& cheated.
Made me cry.
Deleted.
MADE ME YOUR W***E!
© 2008 Mercury Mirrors
Reviews
I love this... the intensity is so real... I love how it ends... really slaps you in the face... very original =)
Posted 16 Years Ago
i have to coment this one so strong such intence fealing it gives one no chios but to be angry for u, u defenetley know how to seiz your readers and not let them go
Posted 16 Years Ago
i have to coment this one so strong such intence fealing it gives one no chios but to be angry for u, u defenetley know how to seiz your readers and not let them go
Well Put! Oh, so strong, so hurt...I'm glad you got it out! This is what poetry is for, 'me thinks'.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Well Put! Oh, so strong, so hurt...I'm glad you got it out! This is what poetry is for, 'me thinks'.
Even badly betrayed and brokem hearts can mend. Another lesson learned You will no doubt disbeleive me when I say its par for the course honey
Posted 16 Years Ago
Even badly betrayed and brokem hearts can mend. Another lesson learned You will no doubt disbeleive me when I say its par for the course honey
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on May 19, 2008
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Mercury Mirrors Pensacola, FL
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Okay, for lack of time, (and most of all for the sake of nostalgia for my angsty and self-absorbed teenage years), I have ripped one of those ancient myspace surveys from the forgotten planes of the i..
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