Pieces

Pieces

A Poem by Lola_Bee

Today I am not as I am supposed to be 

building my life piece by piece.



......


I dissect all that I am,

the pieces I've picked up and the pieces I've lost

Where does each piece fit?

I try to find the pieces but at what cost?

 

Every single part either hidden or too exposed

I try and for a bit; they actually fit

But pieces forced are pieces that do not belong.

Examined carefully; those pieces are wrong

 

 Never complete

As I lay my heart at my feet



© 2018 Lola_Bee


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Hard to reconstruct places and feeling we had lost.
"Never complete
As I lay my heart at my feet"
I believe we cannot return from we started. Must find a path we love and run toward her. Thank you Lola for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lola_Bee

3 Years Ago

thank you for reading and always leaving such amazing comments.
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I enjoyed this poem Lola_Bee and you are welcome.



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This poem was so emotional and well written. I felt the vulnerability within every line. It's not easy to configure the puzzle that is us, sometimes we can just stare at the incomplete and picture the beauty in defeat. I've got to say I've reviewed a lot of pieces today and this poem stands out. I have come back and read it thrice already.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lola_Bee

3 Years Ago

wow thank you so much. I'm glad this piece evoked emotion in you. thank you for the review
Hard to reconstruct places and feeling we had lost.
"Never complete
As I lay my heart at my feet"
I believe we cannot return from we started. Must find a path we love and run toward her. Thank you Lola for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lola_Bee

3 Years Ago

thank you for reading and always leaving such amazing comments.
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I enjoyed this poem Lola_Bee and you are welcome.

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Lola_Bee

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