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A Poem by Lonesome Traveler

 Slowly as we drift apart

Am I having a change of heart?

When loyalty asks the question

"What will be your position?"

 

"Have you chosen the path you like

when you a riding your speedy bike?"

The time that question I faced

Suddenly, I feel like I'm losing the race

 

Which path to chose, I would think

That won't be answered in a blink

It's hard enough to chose what's right

Unless you are given bright light

 

Sadly, the truth has been said

And this I can't take to bed

I may have that change of heart

and in life, make a new start.

© 2009 Lonesome Traveler


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Lonesome Traveler
Ignore ALL my grammar problems

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Don't worry. You could compromise grammar in doing poetry anyway and that's justified according to your intentions. :)
Pretty traditional in form, rhythm and rhyme. The message is clear to the point, but there's something in your poem that begs to be tweaked a little more to make it your piece a little more interesting.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 16, 2009

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Lonesome Traveler
Lonesome Traveler

Parañaque, NCR, Philippines



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Hey people! Lonesome Traveler here! Nice to meet you! I'm not really an author, not really a writer.. I just do this if i had the inspiration to do it! (Admin don't delete my account!) I love po.. more..

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