Marlboro

Marlboro

A Poem by Lookwithinsight
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So desperately wanting someone who's depressed.

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I want to be your Marlboro.

I want to be close to your lips.

I want to be the irony in your life,

your shortened abyss.

© 2014 Lookwithinsight


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hahaha this is awesome, its definitely different

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is so really good. I love the concept of using a Marlboro to exhibit a desire to want to be close to someone. "I want to be the irony in your life, your shortened abyss" are such good lines and it shows that desperation when you don't care how you're able to be close to someone you just want to be able to do it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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9 Years Ago

Thank you. This review is on point!
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9 Years Ago

I just realized I said "so really good" face palm.

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Added on November 18, 2014
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Tags: longing, ironic

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Lookwithinsight

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My name is Kimberlee, but people call me Kimmy a lot. I'm eighteen and I live in South Carolina. I never know what to put on these. I write poems. I'm making this so that I can meet other writers, s.. more..

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