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Need to Know

Need to Know

A Poem by Lorame

What are we doing and how far have we come? 
I wish I could know if we’re through, if we’re done,
or if it’s all in my head, what we have shared. 
Maybe it doesn’t matter and you never cared. 
But it’s hard to let go of something so sweet,
and maybe it was fate that made us meet. 
It’s meant so much to me from the very start. 
And you are someone who could have had my heart.
Why can’t we just say what we think and feel? 
I need to know if any of this is real... 
if it’s worth waiting for you and hoping on, 
or if I should move past this and wish it’d be gone. 
I don’t want to say goodbye, I truly don’t. 
One word from you, and I promise you I won’t. 
But unless I can know where we both stand, 
I’ll have to walk on and let go of your hand.

© 2010 Lorame


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well worded

Posted 13 Years Ago


This happened to me recently where I needed to know myself that it was tormenting me. if me and my love should be together. I had no idea what was true or not. Sometimes it is best to just move on, but not when you have the slightest feeling that the other person feels the same way you do. I sympathize.. I like the rhyming and strong message to whoever this is for. I don't mean to assume but it doesn't come off as fictional; Loved it

Posted 13 Years Ago


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No communication in a relationship is a killer. This speaks volumes to me. I felt it all the way in my heart.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Communication or lack there of is so misleading.
We always question ourselves on what went wrong.
Yet we never truly get all the right answers we keep
searching for. So heartrending when we come up
empty.

Nice write...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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