Peace Rain

Peace Rain

A Poem by LODEWYK
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The Peace that comes with the small things in life..

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The rain is here. Drops from the everlasting sky Bring life and excitement in the hearts of many.As the charming sun says goodbye and the clouds take over, A world of nostalgia and emotion awakens.The slumberous branches of the age-old trees Sing a song of forgotten days as the wind rushes through them. And suddenly you have the opportunity to take it in, To live and embrace and inhale the sweet moment That so many in the concrete jungle have never experienced before.Busy with their robotic systems and voice searches, They miss it again. They always miss it. Do you dance in the rain or are you on your way to get a faster charger?

© 2022 LODEWYK


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LODEWYK
Ignore grammar problems.

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Some lovely descriptions going on here, one that particularly stood out to me was your line “The slumberous branches of the age-old trees Sing a song of forgotten days” that’s really lovely and I can imagine the trees longing for a bit of rain to water their roots while us busy humans rush around to take shelter.

Best wishes

Lathen.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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Some lovely descriptions going on here, one that particularly stood out to me was your line “The slumberous branches of the age-old trees Sing a song of forgotten days” that’s really lovely and I can imagine the trees longing for a bit of rain to water their roots while us busy humans rush around to take shelter.

Best wishes

Lathen.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 2, 2022
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Tags: Rain, Peace, Rat race, Society

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LODEWYK
LODEWYK

Potchefstroom, North West Province, South Africa



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